Blood, Sweat and Tears - Poetry Collection
These "chapters" include a collection of original poems I've made over the past few years. I hope you enjoy them, please leave me any feedback with constructive criticism...and let me know which poems are your personal favourite piece(s), thanks. :)
I want you by my side,
But not anytime soon.
My deep emotions hide
On the dark side of the moon.
That night, when we met,
I was blissfully unaware -
That today, I'd be upset,
Nervously twirling my hair.
I can only hope you come by
Again, quickly as you vanish.
Your absence makes me cry,
As my feelings begin to famish.
But not anytime soon.
My deep emotions hide
On the dark side of the moon.
That night, when we met,
I was blissfully unaware -
That today, I'd be upset,
Nervously twirling my hair.
I can only hope you come by
Again, quickly as you vanish.
Your absence makes me cry,
As my feelings begin to famish.
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"I want you by my side, but not anytime soon."
I really like this line. I think the first one is my favorite. These are very well done.
I'm glad you do, I've created eight other poems as well. I'd love it if you take a gander at them all, the last one is my latest one.
DARK SOULS!!!
I knew as soon as I read the first sentence! XD
Haha, so you've played a Dark Souls game before?
I've only played Dark Souls III and Bloodborne, which I also made a poem about - have a look, if you like. :D Both are very addictive games, despite the difficulty, lol.
I really like them.They are passionate and very well written
Thanks, do you have a favourite poem from the current seven? O.o I'd also like to know why, if you can further specify, but if you can't, then it's fine. I just like to know this sort of stuff, lol.
Very nice.
Thanks! ^.^