~How It All Started~ (A Louis Tomlinson Love Story)
I could hear her voice in my dreams, like a faint sound of an angel in the night sky. I couldn't get her off my mind since we met and every time I thought of her, my heart skipped a beat. Just when I thought that my life could get any better, she was gone..............
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Chapter 1
Back against the wall
He pushed me up against the wall, kissing me with all the passion he had. I felt my face turn dark red, as he kissed me. His lips and my lips moved in perfect sync, like we were meant for each other. I was happy but in utter shock to know his attraction to me. I thought we were just mates, nothing more than friends that spend a few months together. He made it very clear that he felt that we should be more than friends. I wanted nothing more than to be kissing him right here and right now. But a faint voice said inside my head What are you doing? You're cheating on your boyfriend! Stop! Before it's too late! It was at that moment that I realized that I couldn't continue this kiss. It was a really good kiss, but I shouldn't have been doing what I was doing! I just thought that I should pull away and just leave, but it was already too late..............
A/N Should I continue? Please tell me what you think in a COMMENT on the bottom
A/N Should I continue? Please tell me what you think in a COMMENT on the bottom
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Keep writing! 5 stars!
5 stars? Really? Thank you so much!
5 stars? Really? Thank you so much!
You deserve it and you're welcome!
How she comes not knowing One Direction?! I know that's a part of your lovely story but she MUST know them! lol.
Well most people write stories with people that know them already and then it's almost not like they end up falling in love with the guys, it's like they only like them cause they're famous.
That's point on there...
Sorry if you don't like my point.
I loved it! It was [[AWESOME]]!
Thank you so much!
Because my favorite song by One Direction is Diana. :)
lol that's why I named her Diana! Because of the song.
I love how you named her Diana. :D
Why?
Awesome! You totally did great with her! Plus, I'm really enjoying reading this story. :D
Awwww! Thank you so much! You have no idea how much you're comments mean to me! :3
I just love this. :D
Thank you!
CONTINUE, CONTINUE, CONTINUE! And Harry is mine. lol
lol Ladies ladies ladies! There's enough of me to go around! Harry
I can always find my boyfriend. ;)
lol So ture! ;)
My favourite is "Brownie"
Me too! You obviously know what his real name is. :3