My first book i have put up to quibblo. enjoy! comment on what i can do to improve my writing. being an author is my dream and i would love some support... im only 12 so i know i have i while to go, but i dream everynight of seeing my books up on the shelves! its not very long, only half a chapter but i just want to see how it goes. also i know my spelling is appauling! there we go spelt that wrong too... but thats because i have a mild dislecsia. lol, another spelling error. please comment! :3
One: Under the stars
through the eyes of binoculars so much more was discovered, andromeda came with a blur of hope; wishing me forwards. pladies gathered silently between cracked clouds. such a sight of glory.
night come forward day behind,
stars of beauty all aligned,
hearts so pure that lost wander,
would stop his tracks to ponder.