My Immortal- With my commentary >:D
Since I got so many comments/likes on my Lovestruck commentary, I've decided to do a commentary on the notorious "My Immortal."
All my commentary will be in bold.
Do not read if you feel like you will take offense. This is a joke served justly.
Also, there is some swearing in here, some on my part, some on the Author's. Just a warning.
The next day I woke up in my bedroom ...And where else would you wake up?. It was snowing and raining again. I opened the door of my coffin and drank some blood from a bottle I had I just imagine you in a diaper drinking red kool-aid out of a baby bottle. My coffin was black ebony and inside it was hot pink velvet with black lace on the ends. I got out of my coffin and took of my giant MCR t-shirt which I used for pajamas. Instead, I put on a black leather dress, a pentagram necklace, combat boots and black fishnets on. I put on four pairs of earrings in my pierced ears, and put my hair in a kind of messy bun. Your average hoe attire
My friend, Willow (AN: Raven dis is u! Like, omg!) woke up then and grinned at me. She flipped her long waist-length raven black hair with pink streaks and opened her forest-green eyes. She put on her Marilyn Manson t-shirt with a black mini, fishnets and pointy high-heeled boots. We put on our makeup (black lipstick white foundation and black eyeliner.)
"OMFG, I saw you talking to Draco Malfoy yesterday!" she said excitedly. "Yeah, he said I'm illiterate. Like, what does that even mean?"
"Yeah? So?" I said, blushing. Vampires don't blush, stupid.
"Do you like Draco?" she asked as we went out of the Slytherin common room and into the Great Hall.
"No I so fucccking don't!" I shouted.Good God, it's just a question woman.
"Yeah right!" she exclaimed. Just then, Draco walked up to me.
"Hi." he said.
"Hi." I replied flirtily.^^ "No I so don't like him, Willow, like ew why would you say... Oh, hey Draco."
"Guess what." he said.
"What?" I asked.
"Well, Good Charlotte are having a concert in Hogsmeade." he told me.Yes, a muggle band is preforming in a strictly wizarding village. Seems legit.
"Oh. My. Fucccking. God!" I screamed. I love GC. They are my favorite band, besides MCR.
"Wellâ€¦. do you want to go with me?" he asked.
I swear to fffff what is it with these people and gasping at the end of every chapter?!