Made of Summer
Hey there :) Thank you for reading this poem. I normally don't share my poems with the world, but I thought it was worth a try to win the poetry contest xD and somehow I won! :3
P.S after I posted this poem here on Quibblo I posted it on the website poems-and-quotes.com :) My username on that website is Planets in the Sky.
Flowers reign in this place of mine,
budding slowly with no thought of time.
Deep in my heart the summer wind flows,
healing my roots from Winters death-throes.
Made of light dipped in reds, oranges and blues
the skies in my head paint the clouds by twos.
Along my paths of chrystal-blue rivers
are the homes of men, both golds and silvers.
Fields of roses make up my mouth,
breathing petals up towards the South.
Rippling pools surrounded by glass
show my emotions through elegance and class.
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Thank you all for your comments! <3 They were the good luck charm needed to win that contest.
budding slowly with no thought of time.
Deep in my heart the summer wind flows,
healing my roots from Winters death-throes.
Made of light dipped in reds, oranges and blues
the skies in my head paint the clouds by twos.
Along my paths of chrystal-blue rivers
are the homes of men, both golds and silvers.
Fields of roses make up my mouth,
breathing petals up towards the South.
Rippling pools surrounded by glass
show my emotions through elegance and class.
_______
Thank you all for your comments! <3 They were the good luck charm needed to win that contest.
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Beautiful. That is sooo much better than any poem i can write! mine are always : Roses are red violets are blue weird stuff.
Amazing!!! Much better than anything I can come up with!!!
your most welcome(:
wow this is so different from what i usually write... its pretty(=
Thank you :]
That was beautiful, it sounds as though it belongs in book. I especially love the line, "Fields of roses make up my mouth, breathing petals up towards the South." Overall a magnificent poem, I hope you make more :)
Wow. I wanted to cry at the first sentence for some reason. :-)
The description is beautiful, as well as how smoothly this poem flows.
Thank you. It was difficult to write the last part of the poem because it had to be at least 18 lines for the contest :) and only 16 lines really fit the poem.
It's lovely. :]
It's just beautiful ♥
Rated 5 stars!
AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!! Good Luck!!!!
Thank you :)