My Poems
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Chapter 2
Hey You
Hey you,
Walking like theres nothin to it,
Carbain blue eyes,
That obsulutly make me lose control,
Dont know how you did it,
But you mended my broken heart,
Just by your smile,
When you talk to me.
You made feel like happiest girl in world,
I loved it when you tried to sing to me,
You made me laugh so hard,
I start to cry,
Thinkin about those days makes me cry,
But now,
I am stronger than ever was,
No more tears,
Wasted on jerks like you..
Thought that was true,
I laugh myself,
To sleep,
Most guys are just like you,
But I wish that wasn't true,
But guys will be guys.
-Danielle Marie
Walking like theres nothin to it,
Carbain blue eyes,
That obsulutly make me lose control,
Dont know how you did it,
But you mended my broken heart,
Just by your smile,
When you talk to me.
You made feel like happiest girl in world,
I loved it when you tried to sing to me,
You made me laugh so hard,
I start to cry,
Thinkin about those days makes me cry,
But now,
I am stronger than ever was,
No more tears,
Wasted on jerks like you..
Thought that was true,
I laugh myself,
To sleep,
Most guys are just like you,
But I wish that wasn't true,
But guys will be guys.
-Danielle Marie
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YOUR POETRY IS EPIC!
All well and good.
I know, but the poem could have been lovelier if it wasn't real... :( ♥♥♥
;( It's so sad, but how could you say I won't like the poem?! It's really nice. ♥ :/
Because It was sad
Aww, I will read it. Wait! :] ♥
Chapter 67: Very good work on the poem, it's lovely. :] Seems a bit different from the others you've written. :) ♥
Yeah I was figure out what i was doing as I went along. Read #68 thats the one I know your not going to like but I spend three days writing it and its all true
WHOA GURL!!!!!!!!!!!AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Why thank you Bows lol
U are really good!
:) Thank you
You have to. ♥
Chapter 66: Sad. ;'( But lovely poem. ♥
Ill keep away from the from the depression I promise <3