Um, well I tried to write a poem.... It sucks though so I am sorry. I usually make poems rhyme but this one I did not. That's why is really terrible. I want to know what I can fix so if you have any suggestions, please tell me.

Chapter 1


You say I'm a dreamer,
With my head in the clouds.
No future, hopeless ideas.
Just wasting my life.

You tell me I'm useless,
In this world we live in.
I guess you are right;
A dreamer has no place here.

So we make our own world.
Free from pain, suffering and fear.
To you, that's nothing more than a fantasy.
But to us, that's everything we are.


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