Creatures of the Night
A story I'm doing with Canuckmom1 and 2Xtreme
The first few chapters aren't written the greatest but keep reading and it gets better
Chapter 1
Chapter 1
Crimson's POV
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Sitting on a small black pillow, I stared at the beautiful dawn sky. It was filled with the colors of black, purple, red, and pink. Beautiful. I pulled my hair to the side and grabbed one of my earrings. It was a sparkling red garnet with black cobwebs around them. My mother gave them to me a very long time ago.
"Crimson?"
I had just noticed my mom had been standing at the door, watching me.
"Are you listening to me?"
Obviously I was in my own world.
"Yes?" I said and turned to her.
"The bus is here."
I sighed. "Okay, thanks."
I trudged down the stairs. Hearing the bus's horn just made me depressed. I grabbed my favorite strawberry juice from the fridge and headed out the door.
This didn't seem like a normal school. I don't see any stupid, annoying populars with their stupid annoying jock boyfriends like at my old school. I walked into the office. Very pleasant. Not bad.
"Um.. Hi."
"Hello, you must the newbie, Crimson. Am I correct?" the secretary said.
This is odd, what kind of secretary says newbie? Certainly not at my school.
"Yes, I'm here for a schedule."
"Of course, one minute." she walked away from her desk.
10 minutes later, she hands me a paper with confusing letters and numbers on it.
"Locker 17.." I whispered to myself. "Combination 6-2-9-7." Those numbers seem so familiar. I slipped the paper into my bag full of books. One more book and I might topple over.
Ivy's POV
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I hate new kids. They get in my way. The best part is that it's my year to guide one around. Her name is Crimson. Hopefully she's vampire like me. I leaned on her locker, waiting for her to hurry up.
"And this is the chemistry room," I said. She seemed so quiet. She had to be some kind of witch planning some evil plan.
"So what classes do you have?" I asked.
"Well," she started. "I have English, Language Arts, Math, Chemistry, World Language, Study Skills...."
Her voice was very deep, she couldn't be a witch, she had to be a werewolf.
"We have English and Chemistry together," I tried to force in a smile. She smiled back.
Werewolves don't smile. She's gotta be a ghost. Nah, she's not pale enough, she's an angel. Her hair isn't blonde. I say she's a fairy. This would have been way easier if I just go up and ask her.
"So, what are you?" I asked. There was confusion on her face. How does she not know what I'm talking about?
"What are you talking about?" Crimson asked
Uh-oh..
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Sitting on a small black pillow, I stared at the beautiful dawn sky. It was filled with the colors of black, purple, red, and pink. Beautiful. I pulled my hair to the side and grabbed one of my earrings. It was a sparkling red garnet with black cobwebs around them. My mother gave them to me a very long time ago.
"Crimson?"
I had just noticed my mom had been standing at the door, watching me.
"Are you listening to me?"
Obviously I was in my own world.
"Yes?" I said and turned to her.
"The bus is here."
I sighed. "Okay, thanks."
I trudged down the stairs. Hearing the bus's horn just made me depressed. I grabbed my favorite strawberry juice from the fridge and headed out the door.
This didn't seem like a normal school. I don't see any stupid, annoying populars with their stupid annoying jock boyfriends like at my old school. I walked into the office. Very pleasant. Not bad.
"Um.. Hi."
"Hello, you must the newbie, Crimson. Am I correct?" the secretary said.
This is odd, what kind of secretary says newbie? Certainly not at my school.
"Yes, I'm here for a schedule."
"Of course, one minute." she walked away from her desk.
10 minutes later, she hands me a paper with confusing letters and numbers on it.
"Locker 17.." I whispered to myself. "Combination 6-2-9-7." Those numbers seem so familiar. I slipped the paper into my bag full of books. One more book and I might topple over.
Ivy's POV
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I hate new kids. They get in my way. The best part is that it's my year to guide one around. Her name is Crimson. Hopefully she's vampire like me. I leaned on her locker, waiting for her to hurry up.
"And this is the chemistry room," I said. She seemed so quiet. She had to be some kind of witch planning some evil plan.
"So what classes do you have?" I asked.
"Well," she started. "I have English, Language Arts, Math, Chemistry, World Language, Study Skills...."
Her voice was very deep, she couldn't be a witch, she had to be a werewolf.
"We have English and Chemistry together," I tried to force in a smile. She smiled back.
Werewolves don't smile. She's gotta be a ghost. Nah, she's not pale enough, she's an angel. Her hair isn't blonde. I say she's a fairy. This would have been way easier if I just go up and ask her.
"So, what are you?" I asked. There was confusion on her face. How does she not know what I'm talking about?
"What are you talking about?" Crimson asked
Uh-oh..
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Im gonna read this book when I'm not bussy because i love this story!!!! favorites!! THANK YOU FOR WRITTING THIS STORY. THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU AND THANK YOU!!! :) <3
Aw, Shadow and Crimson! I love this story and the combination of the two writing styles. Job well done!
OMG! OMG! OMG! You have to continue! Please!!! I love it! :O
You have to keep writing the story. I need to know what happens next.
OMG, it reminds me of the story i read in first grade about twin vampire sisters, one human and the other not. The last time I read it the ending was finding out the father of the vampire was also the father of the human twin. The two stories I read from my question so far always remind me of something...
OMG, it reminds me of the story i read in first grade about twin vampire sisters, one human and the other not. The last time I read it the ending was finding out the father of the vampire was also the father of the human twin. The two stories I read from my question so far always remind me of something...
This chapter u just made is great it leaves a ton of suspense
Awesome story!!!
This has so many reads... Congrats!!
next chapter!!!! i am gonna die with suspense if you don't!!!!!! :)