The Gift of Six
Me
the_unknown
Linde
StupidSparkles
Raindancer19
6 teenagers are swept up into a wild scheme to rid the world of dangerous criminals.
But these are no ordinary people . . .
“Explain to me again why we're here?" I snapped, my voice tight with nerves. My arms were folded so tight across my chest my biceps bulged with strain, and my knuckles were white.
“You all were . . . Selected," the scientist purred, his square glasses reflecting my own face back at me, "as the most powerful teenagers in the surrounding 10,000 miles."
“Big whoop. Now what?" A girl with short dark hair and an athletes body stood on the wall next to me, in a similar position.
“Needles and test tubes?" I snickered.
“Needles?" Another girl, short with dull brown hair and a big nose whimpered. Her blue eyes filled with tears.
A girl with vibrant orange hair and a sweet body slipped an arm over her shoulder protectively.
“I doubt there’ll be needles,†she said softly. Her electric blue eyes locked onto mine, and I hit the sudden realization that I was the only boy in the room. I pushed off the wall.
“The ‘most powerful teenagers in 10,000 fricking miles’ and they’re all girls? You couldn’t find one more damn boy?†I was pacing back and forth now, and the room seemed to darken. The scientists looked around in fear except for one. A woman with curling brown hair and soft gray eyes. She stared directly at me, which was odd because most people turned away at my startlingly green eyes which seem out of place in my dark Italian looks.
“Hmph. I should think you of all people wouldn’t want another guy. Now you don’t have to fight of the attention of all these pretty girls.†Well that was a load of BS if I’ve ever heard one. All the girls weren’t ugly, but they seemed to be a few knives short of a drawer if you know what I mean.
“Well,†one scientist pushed his glasses up nervously. “I think we should all take time to get to know one another.â€
“I’m Tyahn Evans,†said the short-haired girl who seemed to be the female version of me, “call me that and I kill you. I go by Crimson.â€
“Ethie Storm.†This girl seemed the most mystical, with long silver hair tied back in a braid and blue eyes that had been green just a moment before.
“Imogen,†one girl said softly. She had wild blonde girls and big brown eyes.
“Amber Zara Johansen,†the one with orange hair chirped out, standing up. She seemed to be the oldest out of all of us.
“Lauren,†sniffled the girl on the floor who was crying. Amber sat back down with her in case she started crying again.
Everyone looked to me.
“Damian,†I said simply, leaning back against the wall and crossing my arms again. “Damian Stefani.â€
“You all were . . . Selected," the scientist purred, his square glasses reflecting my own face back at me, "as the most powerful teenagers in the surrounding 10,000 miles."
“Big whoop. Now what?" A girl with short dark hair and an athletes body stood on the wall next to me, in a similar position.
“Needles and test tubes?" I snickered.
“Needles?" Another girl, short with dull brown hair and a big nose whimpered. Her blue eyes filled with tears.
A girl with vibrant orange hair and a sweet body slipped an arm over her shoulder protectively.
“I doubt there’ll be needles,†she said softly. Her electric blue eyes locked onto mine, and I hit the sudden realization that I was the only boy in the room. I pushed off the wall.
“The ‘most powerful teenagers in 10,000 fricking miles’ and they’re all girls? You couldn’t find one more damn boy?†I was pacing back and forth now, and the room seemed to darken. The scientists looked around in fear except for one. A woman with curling brown hair and soft gray eyes. She stared directly at me, which was odd because most people turned away at my startlingly green eyes which seem out of place in my dark Italian looks.
“Hmph. I should think you of all people wouldn’t want another guy. Now you don’t have to fight of the attention of all these pretty girls.†Well that was a load of BS if I’ve ever heard one. All the girls weren’t ugly, but they seemed to be a few knives short of a drawer if you know what I mean.
“Well,†one scientist pushed his glasses up nervously. “I think we should all take time to get to know one another.â€
“I’m Tyahn Evans,†said the short-haired girl who seemed to be the female version of me, “call me that and I kill you. I go by Crimson.â€
“Ethie Storm.†This girl seemed the most mystical, with long silver hair tied back in a braid and blue eyes that had been green just a moment before.
“Imogen,†one girl said softly. She had wild blonde girls and big brown eyes.
“Amber Zara Johansen,†the one with orange hair chirped out, standing up. She seemed to be the oldest out of all of us.
“Lauren,†sniffled the girl on the floor who was crying. Amber sat back down with her in case she started crying again.
Everyone looked to me.
“Damian,†I said simply, leaning back against the wall and crossing my arms again. “Damian Stefani.â€
uibblo Membership is FREE!
175 Comments
Please login or register to submit your comment.
I JUST READ ALL OF THAT. It was, AMAZING! All of the writing was beautiful and esquisite! The plot was different but that's what made me love it so much! All of the characters were their own but I think I lie Imogen and Damian's relationship the best, the fact that they always fought yet when it came down too it really cared for each other made me love them even more! This is by far the best group story I've ever read, most times there is a weak writer who messes up the story but ...
(Ran out of room because I have so many great things to say) like I was saying, all of you were very strong authors and kept the same vibe through out the story and all kept each others characters very well which is very hard to do since everyone has their own perspective on each characters. One last thing ... I know this was written a while ago so there is a possibility that the sequel is already out and if so please give me the link because I am dying to read more!
OMG thank you! I'm glad you read the whole thing! :D And thank you so much for all of the nice things. Damogen (Damian+Imogen=Damogen, yes the readers made a ship name xD) is pretty complicated, but definitely cute! http://www.quibblo.com/quiz/hhvw-fq/The-Dawn-of-Six is the sequel, and if we get enough there may even be a trilogy! :D Again, thank you so much for reading and taking the time to comment :)
I CANT BELIEVE ITS OVER... sob sob
BUT YAY! A sequel! Cant wait! I just wanted to say- thanks to all the people writing and reading this- but especially MrsKittyStyles! You have done such a great job on this story, and thank you for letting me write in such a wonderful story! :)
Well thank you! :D Everyone in this story are my closest friends, and we had no problem making this one of the best stories on Quibblo!! (Even if people don't realize it yet ;D)
"This is the very LAST chapter of Gift of Six...": http://media.tumblr.com/tumblr_lmc0wbkKcS1qbfjcz.gif
"Thanks SO SO SO SO SO much to all our dedicated readers...": http://media.tumblr.com/tumblr_ljmdbpvWCx1qztwte.gif
"... And I know my writers would feel the same!": http://media.tumblr.com/tumblr_lolw9jrjQL1qd06fi.gif
"But wait, you couldn't get rid of us THAT easily!": http://media.tumblr.com/tumblr_m8rokmV6zL1qhk6l1.gif
"SEQUEL!": http://media.tumblr.com/tumblr_lkl6p6JvZD1qbroyg.gif
I can just see you doing all of those!!!!!! xDxDxD
Oh. My. Golly. Gosh!
KITTY, YOU ALMOST KILLED ME WHEN YOU SAID IT WAS THE LAST CHAPTER.
WEW! You have no idea how big of a Sigh I breathed out when I read about the sequel. :D
OHMYGOSHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! GET STARTED ON THE DAWN OF SIX NOWWW!!!! THAT WAs A BRILLIANT, FABULOUS, EXTRAVEGENT, EXTRAORDINARY ENDING. HOLY GUACAMOLE WITH CHEEEEEEEEEEEESE!!!
what she said ^
Thanks! :D I'll be sure to write fast!
Exciting new chapter. I'm on the edge of my seat, waiting for more soon!!
Thanks! :D
I'm sorry, but I have a complaint about chapter 41... And no, it's not only because I can't stand the idea of Damian and Amber together instead of Damian and Imogen!
One of my pet peeves is when a character "just knows" something. I really don't think Imogen was being obvious enough to show that she had a secret and it annoys me that not only Amber knew it, but seemingly Damian, too.
It's perfectly alright! I see what you mean when I read the chapter again. If you want, with my consent in case she gets mad, you could message Raindancer19 about it? I'm sure she'd love the help :)
Thanks for understanding. I just want the best for this story and all the writers as they hone their skills. :)
OMG I am so sorry you feel that way! I'm still adjusting the the styles of other writers on her, so sorry if you don't think i am that good :( I will try to fix anything you say, i hate to make people, "uncomfortable" So so sorry...
You can message me if you like! I actually don't really like the relationship between them either, when my character locked them in the room, i thought it would end differently. So so sorry :(
Thanks! Gonna start after I read my messages!
OMGOMGOMG STUPID DELRIYSER NONONO!!! I can't wait to write!
It's your turn! Teagz is slipping out this round, so happy writing! :)
Wow. @.@
Amazing new chapter. BUT POOOR IMOGEN!!! Bree did a great job on that!!!