Beep-Beep-Beep (A sad One-shot)

I was crying as I wrote this. It's about a little girl who goes into a coma.

Chapter 1


Beep- Beep- Beep. That's all I hear right now. It's been a while since the last visit. I can't move,or talk. Many times I try to open my eyes, but I can't. The last thing I remember before I went into darkness was the sound of a car honking loudly. It was raining. A Friday. I was skipping home with my daddy from the near-by park, then a bright light shined into my eyes. That's all I remember.

It feels like it's been a eternity. My mommy sometimes come into the room I'm in and reads me stories. I like the story about Cinderella. For some reason when my mommy finishes reading, she sounds like she crying. Then she's kiss my cheek and whispers, "Bye, my beautiful angel." I want to hug her, and tell her it's alright. Anything to stop her crying. But I can't move.

On ,what I believe is my birthday, my mommy and daddy come in. I can hear them sniffling. I think mommy is crying. I try to tell my mommy that I love her, but my voice isn't working.

Daddy hugs me gently and whisper in my ear, "You're now 8-years-old, baby girl. I love you." Mommy suddenly bursts into tears, and daddy had to take her out of the room. They didn't come back.

It seems like a eternity when they came back. Daddy and Mommy we're both crying. That's weird. Daddy never cries unless something really bad happened.

I hear a strange man walk into the room and say, "You may have 10 minutes with her, and say your good-byes. When the time comes I think you should leave." The strange man leaves, and my parents almost immediately came up to me and hug me.

Mommy kept crying, and when she spoke, her voice cracked. "I love you darling. You're my beautiful princess." I tried to say I love you too, but I couldn't.

Daddy caress my cheek, and whispers in my ear, "You're going to make a beautiful angel. I love you." His voice cracked, and I can feel something wet hit my cheek.

The strange man came back in, and that's when my mother starts screaming, "No! No! She's still there! No!" I felt like crying. Wanted to yell out that I was right there. I think Daddy took Mommy out of the room. I can tell because her screaming starts getting fainter. As if she was in the hallway.

I hear the strange man walk up to my bed. Then I felt a strange pinch in my arm. It feels just like a needle I get when I needed to get my shots. The man then says, "Rest in peace."

The Beep-Beep-Beep turns into a Beep-Beep. Then just a Beep. I feel tired, and start going to sleep. Maybe when I wake up I'll be able to move again. As soon as I fall asleep, I heard the beeps end.

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