My Immortal, re-written.

The original hurts my already weak brain.....

Chapter 1

I tried.. A bit...

by: Teagzi
AN: Special fangz (get it, coz Im goffik) 2 my gf (ew not in that way) raven, bloodytearz666 4 helpin me wif da story and spelling. U rok! Justin ur da luv of my deprzzing life u rok 2! MCR ROX!

Hi, my name is Ebony Way and I have long ebony black hair with purple streaks and red tips that reaches my mid-back and icy blue. I'm not related to Gerard Way but I wish I knew him, because he's a major phucking hottie. I'm a vampire that has fangs and am non-sparkly. I have pale white skin. I'm also a witch, and I go to a magic school called Hogwarts in England where I'm in the seventh year, I'm seventeen. I'm a goth and I wear mostly black. I love Hot Topic and I buy all my clothes from there. For example today I was wearing normal people clothes, not anything even slightly whore-ish. I was wearing black lipstick, white foundation, black eyeliner and red eye shadow. I was walking outside Hogwarts. It was raining so there was no sun, which I was very happy about. A lot of preps stared at me, I tastefully ignored them.
"Hey Ebony!" shouted a voice. I looked up. It was... Draco Malfoy!
"What's up Draco?" I asked.
"Nothing." he said shyly.
But then, I heard my friends call me and I had to go away.
AN: IS it good? PLZ tell me fangz!

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AN: Fangz 2 bloodytearz666 4 helpin me wif da chapta! BTW preps stop flaming ma story ok!

The next day I woke up in my bath tub. It was snowing today. I opened the curtain’s around my bed and drank some apple juice from a bottle I had. My bed had black blankets and lot‘s of green pillows covering it. I got out of my bed and took off my giant MCR t-shirt which I used for pyjamas. Instead, I put on non-Slutty clothing. I put on four pairs of earrings in my pierced ears, and put my hair in a messy bun.
My friend, Willow woke up then and grinned at me. She flipped her long waist-length raven black hair with pink streaks and she put on her Warning: Slutty clothing description was removed in the remaking of this story. We put on our makeup together.
"OMFG, I saw you talking to Draco Malfoy yesterday!" she said excitedly, she‘s goffick like that.
"Yeah, so?" I said, blushing.
"Do you like Draco?" she asked as we went out of the Slytherin common room and into the Great Hall.
"Well duh! Why do you think I’m blushing?” I said with a normal tone of voice.
"Cool!" she exclaimed. Just then, Draco walked up to me.
"Hi." he said.
"Hi." I replied flintily(Teagzi-My spellcheck makes me laugh sometimes…).
"Guess what." he said.
"What?" I asked.
"Well, Good Charlotte aren’t having a concert in Hogsmeade." he told me.
"Oh my gods!" I screamed. I why would I care about a stupid muggle band? As a witch (cough self-insertion cough) I love wrock bands.
"Well... do you want to go with me?" he asked.
I gasped, “ I thought you said they aren‘t playing?”
“Oh, yeah, I forgot! Never mind!” he replied and then he DANCED AWAY!

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