my FIRST ever POEM!! PLS READ

my FIRST ever POEM!! PLS READ

well,i had a creative rush of emotions,
which resulted,in my first EVER poem!!!xD
and omg,i wrote it all by myself!!lol
oh,and,btw,it's a little depressing,but it's impowering also!!
pls enjoy and comment!!

Chapter 1

"Free of your hold"

by: indiegirl
You say hello,
you cast a spell,
my god,how quickly i fell
your stare cuts to my core,
i've never felt like this before
the days turn into weeks,
where i'm so entranced i could barely speak
and i thought you'd be the one to show me how glorious first love is,
the one who brightens up all the darkness,
but instead you showed me you couldn't care less,
and you broke my heart into shattered glass bits
you were so cold,
but your playing with my emotions finally took it's toll,
and now
i am forever free,
of your hold.

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