DX..TWILIGHT LOVE STORY: JARED..XD

this is the first real story i am writing so enjoy....
setting: la push, Washington
your a 16 year old girl named Brianna uley, your family and friends calls you bri.. your just moving back to la push.....but first you have to say good bye to your friends and Elliot your bestii!!!

WELL I HOPE YOU ENJOY!!!

Chapter 1

moving back......(read intro.)

'I can't believe my mom sent me to live with my brother back home! in two days I'm going back to la push, Washington to live with Sam,(me: Sam uley is your bother) . " i say to my best friend Lauren. "I'm gonna miss you bri" says Lauren trying not to cry.i know lue!(her nickname). we continued packing and talking. she promised to visit me some time this summer. I was in the middle of trying to pack when my phone rang. it was my best guy friend Elliot. i hadn't got the chance to tell him i was leaving (me: he has a huge crush on you) . "hey Elliot!""hey bri.... is it true?" i guess he heard. "is it true your leaving to Washington?!....." he asked impatiently... he sounded so sad. ".... yes." i say slowly, scared of his reaction. why did he ave to find out like this?
"who told you ell?(ell is his nickname)??" "Lue...." i gave her an over dramatic glare..... she knew how he felt about me and didn't like it, maybe that's why she told him i thought. "I'm sorry" she whispered...."don't be sad Elliot. its only supposed to be for a couple months..."at the least i think, i added in my head. "oh.... so when are you leaving?" he asked. "in two days...."
"oh my god! two days?! are you serious! bri were gonna hang out tomorrow." "but ell i hav-..." "i don't wanna hear it. your my bestii and i have to have you for a whole day before you leave" ''okay ell but i have to say good bye to my dad before i leave. i wanted to visit him tomorrow'' "okay its a date then" "ell no. i don't wanna make things weird so please NO DATE!" "too late! you already agreed..." he said a little to excitedly, "fine its a date. be here at 12:30." i said. then i hung up.i felt kinda glad that we were going on date tomorrow "so you and Elliot have a date tomorrow?" Lauren said.... god! she scared me. i forgot she was there. "yeah, i guess i do..... omg what am i gonna wear. "..... i cant believe i was so excited for a date i didnt want to happen at first! this could go both good or bad... OH NO! WHAT HAVE I DONE!

*******************************next day********************************

i woke up and realized it was almost 12:00 dammit Elliot will be here at 12:30! i decided to straighten me hair really quick. i wore my black skinny jeans and a skelanimal hoodie with a black beanie. man i look good i thought just as the door bell rang. "i got it mom..." "where are you going?" my mom asked "to say bye to dad" "oh...." she was shocked. i haven't talked about him since the day of his funeral."well be home by midnight.... have fun""bye mom.... love ya." Elliot new my dad had died (he had a severe heart attack). we walked hand in hand down the street to the cemetery where dad was buried. "honestly i was shocked that you said you were gonna say bye to your dad. i mean you haven't talked about him since the funeral." he looked kinda worried, the kind of worried you get when you see your friends wrist with cuts on it. "whats wrong Elliot?" i asked. "before we go threw these gates do something for me." "what is it??" "promise me you wont cry when we get in there" i giggled.... he never liked it when i was sad. "i pinky promise"... we both laughed (insider with him). we walked through the rows until we were at the dead center of the cemetery. i looked down reading the grave stone "beloved, son, husband, father, and friend"
Elliot looked so weirded out. he never liked cemeteries. we sat at my fathers grave talking about memories of my dad and how he was an awesome man. after about 35 to 40 minutes there we headed to a park. i noted in my head that it was the park we met at..... awwww how sweet.... we sat and talked about him possibly visiting me too with lue. he pushed me on the swing until it was about 6 or 7.we just kept talking about how were gonna miss each other when he kissed me out of nowhere. i didn't pull back, but instead i kissed him back. when we finally stop kissing we looked into each others eyes and giggled! "i have a surprise for you" he said. i was curious... he knew i hated surprises. "Elliot i-" "shh just close your eyes and take my hand" he led me to his truck where he put a blind fold on me(he lives right next door to the park). we drove for about 25 minutes before he let me take the blind fold off. "ahhh.... elliot!" tbc

I HOPE YOU ENJOYED IT.... LEAVE COMMENTS WITH IDEAS FOR CHAPTER TWO.... IF YOU WANNA BE APART OF THE STORY THEN LEAVE A NAME OF YOUR CHOICE AND WHAT YOU WANT TO DO WITH THE STORY

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