the hot tub
number 2 of my romance genre stories i wrote for my man. Gabriel
Chapter 1
hot tub duo
"this party was kinda weird." i smile, trying to think of something to start a conversation.
"agreed," you laugh at my shy expression. "soo, wanna get in the hot tub? it would be awesome temperature considering the cold outside." you grin, and I catch on to your intentions.
"lets go,"
~out in the hot tub~
"Gosh! this hot tubs big enough to have an orgy in!" I yelled in surprise.
"Is that an invitation?" you joked. We both walk out further onto the patio and i smile shyly. "what's wrong?" you laugh.
"i just realized something,"
"what's that?"
"neither of us have swim suits," i grinned and looked up to meet your eyes.
"who needs 'em," my face turns bright purple.
~3rd person~
Ashley reached up and took the hem of her shirt in her hands, pulling it over her head. The cool air licking her skin, sending shivers down her spine. She looked over and saw Gabriel examining her with a close eye. it made her blush with the expression that was on his face.
"Your blushing." he smiled, and there was nothing polite about it.
"I blush when you look at me like that," she grinned, looking down and begining to work on her jeans button. It was jammed.
"like what?"
"like I'm something to eat," the red turned a dark purple. Smiling, Gabriel walked over and gently unbuttoned her jeans with a flick of one finger. "thanks," she blushed.
"any time,"
she shimmied her jeans down her hips and Gabriel couldn't help but think she reminded him of a woman from a horror movie. The way her hips swung to slide the jeans down with ease.
After they had both stripped to their under clothes, they climbed into the hot tub. Ashley deliberately on the opposite side of Gabriel.
"man this is nice," he grinned, sinking a little further into the water where it met his lips. With a grin he smacke the water at her. The water coming up to meet her in the face. She smiled and slapped back at him. The water missing him by a foot. They both grinned.
"so, what do you want to do now?" Colten smiled, not sure how to lessen the awkwardness in the air. Smiling, Ashley slid over beside Gabriel. Agast at what she was about to do.
"I can think of a few things," she grinned, tracing circles on his arm that rest on the sides of the hot tub.
Leaning forward, she met his lips with intense force. He pulled her over onto his lap and ran his hands up her back.
He teased her bra strap, pulling it down an inch, then two, as if asking for permission. In responce, she moved her shoulder to make the strap fall all the way down her shoulder. She felt the bulge in his boxers against her inner thigh.
"take it off,"
She reached back, unhooked her bra, and set her breast free of the underwire. Again the cool air sent a shiver through her.
She let her head fall back, causing her hair to slip over her shoulders. She thrusted out her breasts, eager for his hungry persual. But what she got instead was his hot lips on her collarbone. His rough hands scraped along her rib cage,
his springy hair brushed her throat as he kissed his way over the rise of her breasts to the hard, aching peak. her elbows trembled, and weakened. She sank into him as he sank into the seat of the so comfortable hot tub. She raked her hands through his hair.
He thought he heard something like grinding of rock, and dismissed it. But then the sound of a car door being slammed jolted him up right.
"hide!" he looked around for someplace to hide her from the intruder. But there didn't seem to be one. Just before the door opened Ash dove under the water. Hopefully the bubbles would hide her.
"Gabriel?" Ashley's friend Musytta questioned. "what are you doing here?" she smiled, walking over to the side of the hot steaming, and somewhat relaxing tub.
"Luke told me to say after an.... ANNNND!. . . eeenjoy. . . myself.. . "
"are you okay?" she was trying not to laugh, but what she didn't know was that while she was thinking Gabriel was alone, Ash was under the water, removing his "situation" and gently teasing him by sucking on it now.
". . .yeeah, mmmmhm, just a leg cramp. Hot water after a while can do that to ya," he wanted her to leave, now.
"well i just came back to get my purse, and try to find Ashley. I guess she went home with someone. She isn't picking up her phone.
"Mmmmmhm, I'm. . . sorry. I havn't. . .seen her." he held in a moan.
"Okay, well have fun. Ima go try to find Ashley." With that she walked out the door. Ashley came bursting out of the water, gasping for breath. but yet not from holding her breath, she was laughing.
"a leg cramp? that's the best you could do?" she smiled, her face pink from the stay under water so long.
"well giving you didn't give me much options considering-" she cut him off with her lips on his for one lingering second.
"considering you were moaning out loud,"
"hey, I don't moan," he smiled. "I bite," with that, he leaned forward and bit her neck. She laughed and let her head fall back.
"yeah, and i bite back, but i bring blood," she smiled, pulling away and kissing him. Suckling his bottom lip into her mouth, she bit down till she tasted blood. He didn't even realize until she had pulled away a kiss away and his lip was throbbing. She kissed him gently as to make it better.
"mmm," she smiled. Skin met skin and she realized that he was fully naked. Sometime while she had been biting his lip, he had removed his boxers. His thigh brushed against her leg, running his hands just on the inside of the hem of her lace black panties.
her pulse shot up. She dragged her hands out of hid hair, down hid nape, then over the flexing muscles of his bare shoulders. His skin was smooth and hot and different in texture from hers-deliciously different. She ran the flat of her palms over him, the muscles beneath hard and strong.
he found her mouth and she turned her face to meet him. Her body light in the water, easy for him to manouvor her into position.
she watned more, yes, much, much more. she wanted to lose control atop her, or under. whichever way worked in this situation. she watned to feel the surge and thrust of his male power, turning her into something soft and womanly and deserving of desire. so this is what it meant to make love, she thought. This was that madness that possessed a woman that made her throw all caution to the wind.
she wanted this experience to go on forever and ever, never ending, never stopping, never losing it;s heat. she wanted to be whole, in some way beyond the physical, in a way she didn't dare to try to understand right now. in this incandescent moment only Gabriel could do that-only Gabriel could make her whole. He shifted her weight so that he could remove her panites. but they wouldnt buj.
"off," he growled.
"buttons,"
"where?"
"left side,"
He found the first expertly, and flicked it open. The pressure eased around her waist. He flicked open the second, the third, and fumbled to find the fourth. The fabric of the panties was twisted tight under her. She lifted her bottom, allowing him to tug them loose. Still he couldn't do the buttons one-handed.
"Get this off, ashley," he said. urgency rippling in his voice. "or I swear. I'll rip it off."
"go ahead," she nipped the corner of his mouth.
"what!"
"rip them off, Gabriel,"
after a pause of disbelief, he tugged so hard that he lifted her bottom clear off his lap. a button popped. The silk ripped; the sound of it muted by the water. with scrabbling hands he grabbed for hte fabric and pulled it free of her legs. Somewhere, Ashley thought, Donna Karan was screaming. (fyi, shes a fashion designer for longerie.)
she couldn't have cared less, designer clothing could be bought anew. but she would go into cardiac arrest, right here, right now, if Gabriel didn't make love to her.
He rubbed her hips and she was brought back to the present. All was sensation, from her hair to her toes. she scrape of his chest against her bare nipple, the thrust of his legs spreading her legs farther apart. The rake of his fingers through her hair, the heat of his kiss on her brow as he proded the tender, swollen place between her legs with the tip of his shaft. The rumble of his chest as he found the entrance of her body and she eased a fraction of him inside her. \
she sucked in a breath that made her vibrate all the way down to her toes.Her body arched, her legs open wider, her hips tipped as she welcomed him, wordlessly urging him deeper. she flexed her palms along his back. his strong body quivering beneath her hands. his kiss setled on her temple, his breath fell hot on her face, and she realized with a rush of realization that Gabriel was trembling.
trembling, for hte want of her. from his passion for her. a glow llit somewhere deep inside her. a warm, vital glow, the knowledge that at this moment she was wanted, desired.
then she moved slightly enough that he was forced all the way insider her. their fit was tight, the friction exquisite as he pulled out until he was flat with the wall and then slowly thrust back in. on the next thrust she lifted her hips to meet him.
they fell into the wonderful synchronicity, they moved as fluidly and effortlessly as two ballet dancers in a well rehearsed pas de deux, though they'd never been this close before. she knew, on some instinctive level, how he was about to move before he moved. and she adjusted her own motion to his. She met thrust in a perfect rhythm. she opened herself when he moved inside her, and closed upon him as he pulled away. she took the lobe of his ear in her mouth as he burrowed his lips deep in her hair. she softened for him as he grew impossibly hard, impossibly anxious, as he quickened his thrusts- hard, deep, fast.
she wrapped her arms around him and cried out, his hair against her mouth, his hips flush against hers, as the tightnesss in her cinched to a pinnacle of impossible pleasure, a tight knot pulled to infinitesimal smallness and then breaking, loosening, sending her mind reeling off into the brightness of the brightest light- as he groaned and lifted her hips to meet his in the final deepest thrust of pleasure.
much, much later when the stprm had ebbed to the lightest patter of rain on the windowpain and the air had turned cool, they climbed out. Laughing as they realized that half the water in the tub had been splashed out from their earlier involvement.
"agreed," you laugh at my shy expression. "soo, wanna get in the hot tub? it would be awesome temperature considering the cold outside." you grin, and I catch on to your intentions.
"lets go,"
~out in the hot tub~
"Gosh! this hot tubs big enough to have an orgy in!" I yelled in surprise.
"Is that an invitation?" you joked. We both walk out further onto the patio and i smile shyly. "what's wrong?" you laugh.
"i just realized something,"
"what's that?"
"neither of us have swim suits," i grinned and looked up to meet your eyes.
"who needs 'em," my face turns bright purple.
~3rd person~
Ashley reached up and took the hem of her shirt in her hands, pulling it over her head. The cool air licking her skin, sending shivers down her spine. She looked over and saw Gabriel examining her with a close eye. it made her blush with the expression that was on his face.
"Your blushing." he smiled, and there was nothing polite about it.
"I blush when you look at me like that," she grinned, looking down and begining to work on her jeans button. It was jammed.
"like what?"
"like I'm something to eat," the red turned a dark purple. Smiling, Gabriel walked over and gently unbuttoned her jeans with a flick of one finger. "thanks," she blushed.
"any time,"
she shimmied her jeans down her hips and Gabriel couldn't help but think she reminded him of a woman from a horror movie. The way her hips swung to slide the jeans down with ease.
After they had both stripped to their under clothes, they climbed into the hot tub. Ashley deliberately on the opposite side of Gabriel.
"man this is nice," he grinned, sinking a little further into the water where it met his lips. With a grin he smacke the water at her. The water coming up to meet her in the face. She smiled and slapped back at him. The water missing him by a foot. They both grinned.
"so, what do you want to do now?" Colten smiled, not sure how to lessen the awkwardness in the air. Smiling, Ashley slid over beside Gabriel. Agast at what she was about to do.
"I can think of a few things," she grinned, tracing circles on his arm that rest on the sides of the hot tub.
Leaning forward, she met his lips with intense force. He pulled her over onto his lap and ran his hands up her back.
He teased her bra strap, pulling it down an inch, then two, as if asking for permission. In responce, she moved her shoulder to make the strap fall all the way down her shoulder. She felt the bulge in his boxers against her inner thigh.
"take it off,"
She reached back, unhooked her bra, and set her breast free of the underwire. Again the cool air sent a shiver through her.
She let her head fall back, causing her hair to slip over her shoulders. She thrusted out her breasts, eager for his hungry persual. But what she got instead was his hot lips on her collarbone. His rough hands scraped along her rib cage,
his springy hair brushed her throat as he kissed his way over the rise of her breasts to the hard, aching peak. her elbows trembled, and weakened. She sank into him as he sank into the seat of the so comfortable hot tub. She raked her hands through his hair.
He thought he heard something like grinding of rock, and dismissed it. But then the sound of a car door being slammed jolted him up right.
"hide!" he looked around for someplace to hide her from the intruder. But there didn't seem to be one. Just before the door opened Ash dove under the water. Hopefully the bubbles would hide her.
"Gabriel?" Ashley's friend Musytta questioned. "what are you doing here?" she smiled, walking over to the side of the hot steaming, and somewhat relaxing tub.
"Luke told me to say after an.... ANNNND!. . . eeenjoy. . . myself.. . "
"are you okay?" she was trying not to laugh, but what she didn't know was that while she was thinking Gabriel was alone, Ash was under the water, removing his "situation" and gently teasing him by sucking on it now.
". . .yeeah, mmmmhm, just a leg cramp. Hot water after a while can do that to ya," he wanted her to leave, now.
"well i just came back to get my purse, and try to find Ashley. I guess she went home with someone. She isn't picking up her phone.
"Mmmmmhm, I'm. . . sorry. I havn't. . .seen her." he held in a moan.
"Okay, well have fun. Ima go try to find Ashley." With that she walked out the door. Ashley came bursting out of the water, gasping for breath. but yet not from holding her breath, she was laughing.
"a leg cramp? that's the best you could do?" she smiled, her face pink from the stay under water so long.
"well giving you didn't give me much options considering-" she cut him off with her lips on his for one lingering second.
"considering you were moaning out loud,"
"hey, I don't moan," he smiled. "I bite," with that, he leaned forward and bit her neck. She laughed and let her head fall back.
"yeah, and i bite back, but i bring blood," she smiled, pulling away and kissing him. Suckling his bottom lip into her mouth, she bit down till she tasted blood. He didn't even realize until she had pulled away a kiss away and his lip was throbbing. She kissed him gently as to make it better.
"mmm," she smiled. Skin met skin and she realized that he was fully naked. Sometime while she had been biting his lip, he had removed his boxers. His thigh brushed against her leg, running his hands just on the inside of the hem of her lace black panties.
her pulse shot up. She dragged her hands out of hid hair, down hid nape, then over the flexing muscles of his bare shoulders. His skin was smooth and hot and different in texture from hers-deliciously different. She ran the flat of her palms over him, the muscles beneath hard and strong.
he found her mouth and she turned her face to meet him. Her body light in the water, easy for him to manouvor her into position.
she watned more, yes, much, much more. she wanted to lose control atop her, or under. whichever way worked in this situation. she watned to feel the surge and thrust of his male power, turning her into something soft and womanly and deserving of desire. so this is what it meant to make love, she thought. This was that madness that possessed a woman that made her throw all caution to the wind.
she wanted this experience to go on forever and ever, never ending, never stopping, never losing it;s heat. she wanted to be whole, in some way beyond the physical, in a way she didn't dare to try to understand right now. in this incandescent moment only Gabriel could do that-only Gabriel could make her whole. He shifted her weight so that he could remove her panites. but they wouldnt buj.
"off," he growled.
"buttons,"
"where?"
"left side,"
He found the first expertly, and flicked it open. The pressure eased around her waist. He flicked open the second, the third, and fumbled to find the fourth. The fabric of the panties was twisted tight under her. She lifted her bottom, allowing him to tug them loose. Still he couldn't do the buttons one-handed.
"Get this off, ashley," he said. urgency rippling in his voice. "or I swear. I'll rip it off."
"go ahead," she nipped the corner of his mouth.
"what!"
"rip them off, Gabriel,"
after a pause of disbelief, he tugged so hard that he lifted her bottom clear off his lap. a button popped. The silk ripped; the sound of it muted by the water. with scrabbling hands he grabbed for hte fabric and pulled it free of her legs. Somewhere, Ashley thought, Donna Karan was screaming. (fyi, shes a fashion designer for longerie.)
she couldn't have cared less, designer clothing could be bought anew. but she would go into cardiac arrest, right here, right now, if Gabriel didn't make love to her.
He rubbed her hips and she was brought back to the present. All was sensation, from her hair to her toes. she scrape of his chest against her bare nipple, the thrust of his legs spreading her legs farther apart. The rake of his fingers through her hair, the heat of his kiss on her brow as he proded the tender, swollen place between her legs with the tip of his shaft. The rumble of his chest as he found the entrance of her body and she eased a fraction of him inside her. \
she sucked in a breath that made her vibrate all the way down to her toes.Her body arched, her legs open wider, her hips tipped as she welcomed him, wordlessly urging him deeper. she flexed her palms along his back. his strong body quivering beneath her hands. his kiss setled on her temple, his breath fell hot on her face, and she realized with a rush of realization that Gabriel was trembling.
trembling, for hte want of her. from his passion for her. a glow llit somewhere deep inside her. a warm, vital glow, the knowledge that at this moment she was wanted, desired.
then she moved slightly enough that he was forced all the way insider her. their fit was tight, the friction exquisite as he pulled out until he was flat with the wall and then slowly thrust back in. on the next thrust she lifted her hips to meet him.
they fell into the wonderful synchronicity, they moved as fluidly and effortlessly as two ballet dancers in a well rehearsed pas de deux, though they'd never been this close before. she knew, on some instinctive level, how he was about to move before he moved. and she adjusted her own motion to his. She met thrust in a perfect rhythm. she opened herself when he moved inside her, and closed upon him as he pulled away. she took the lobe of his ear in her mouth as he burrowed his lips deep in her hair. she softened for him as he grew impossibly hard, impossibly anxious, as he quickened his thrusts- hard, deep, fast.
she wrapped her arms around him and cried out, his hair against her mouth, his hips flush against hers, as the tightnesss in her cinched to a pinnacle of impossible pleasure, a tight knot pulled to infinitesimal smallness and then breaking, loosening, sending her mind reeling off into the brightness of the brightest light- as he groaned and lifted her hips to meet his in the final deepest thrust of pleasure.
much, much later when the stprm had ebbed to the lightest patter of rain on the windowpain and the air had turned cool, they climbed out. Laughing as they realized that half the water in the tub had been splashed out from their earlier involvement.



11 Comments
Oh wow
haha. its not THAT good. your stories r better
wet now ;)
well i think that means you like it lol
Honestly. This is dirtier than a sewer. A sewer with corpses of plague victims rotting in it.
is that a bad thing??
'_____'
would people please specify what they mean... I don't understand if some of your comments are good or bad.
I'm never having a bath again... Well at least for a few years... It was well written, but disturbing ;D
thank you... i think. lol
thank you... i think. lol